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Amy Yang https://youtu.be/ryUnDeHDdSY

In-class writing

1.What was your vision as a director/creator for this project? My vision for this project is to express my own feeling because this story relates to my experience in my life and transfer it to a drama presenting by pictures. 2. What elements of the original story did you maintain in your project? I maintain the climax in my story. The brother has similar reaction as Ms.Mallard when he saw his sister still alive. He dislikes his sister in the way of Ms.Mallard dislikes her husband. So they were all happy when they knew their relatives died. 3. What did you change about the original story in your project? Basically, my story happened between a brother and a sister. The original story happened between a wife and a husband. I have a different ending with the original story. The wife was died in the original story, but I have a happy ending in my story. 4. What is the twist or climax of your adaptation? My climax/twist is that when brother knew his sister dead, he was a...

First draft on stage picture

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Pictures 1 family picture introducing the brother and sister. 2 brother is jealous about the reward that sister received. probably it's about 40 dollars. 3 sister is doing art project at school 4 parents got call from hospital said sister is in emergency. 5 brother is a little bit sad at first. Thinking about good memory they had. 6 He thinks for a while. Then he has a smile on his face. 7 He realizes that he will be the only child at home. He felt happy about that. 8 He laughed loudly. Kinda out of control. 9 Parents arrived hospital and found out that doctor called wrong phone number. There is only one digit difference between two phone numbers. 10 Parents go pick sister up from school.  11 After they back, brother was so shocked and so excited. 12 Even he was happy about that he will be the only child at home, but when he saw his sister, he was more excited.  P3-P2-P8

Idea about adaptation

Adaptation 1.genre Drama 2.characters Johnson’s family: dad Mrs.Johnson, mom Mr.Johnson, daughter Fiona, son Jason 3.settings All happened on a rainy day in 2013 Winter. Fiona and Jason don’t like each other. They both thought that if they didn't have one another, s/he would be the only child in the family and would have all the love of his/her parents. 4.plot Mr.Johnson, Mrs.Johnson and Jason are having dinner together at home. Fiona is doing her art project in school and she texts her mom that she will back home late. Jason is complaining that Fiona got 40 dollars from their parents and it was given as award for getting A on math test two days before. Jason did not get this award so he feels unhappy. Then Mr.Johnson got a call from hospital. The man on the phone said “your daughter was hit by a car and now is in the emergency room!” Then, Mr.Johnson and Mrs.Johnson ran straight out of the house and drove to the hospital. Jason was shocked at first. Even h...

Modernize 'the story of an hour'

Amy Yang IB Lit&Perf SL Ms.Guarino 12/4/2019 For me, there are some sentences and words that I do not understand. Maybe that is because the writing style is not modernized. Therefore, I would like to modernize some sentences and words. There are some beautiful sentences that I like them so much, for example, "The delicious breath of rain was in the air. In the street below a peddler was crying his wares." and " There were patches of blue sky showing here and there through the clouds that had met and piled one above the other in the west facing her window." Actually, I do not really understand "modernize the story". For this story, I probably can only remember the main plot, such as Mrs.Mallard has heart trouble, and when she knew her husband died by a railroad disaster, she was crying and really sad. But when she saw her husband and found that he did not die, she died  because she was "too happy". I think that is how much I understand a...